Hi ho!
I know, I know, somehow I do here every day entries, which reads eh no, but ............... It's just fun> _ \u0026lt;xD
I am about the 5th Chapter of my story " Someday for Somebody " to write and learn although I for French and ethics should x__x but I'm too unmotivated for it ... Unfortunately for me, well .. for my readers hehe ^ ^;;
So the here are a little more interesting, I betray here now and a few secrets from the story * _ * (possibly spoiler, but the course is another story not sure betrayed)
first Jin I'm named after Akanishi Jin xD This is the guy in my header (see left) and the:
I like Jin easy ^ ^
Chris I Chris ganannt because I remembered nothing better. Nich my favorite name, but okay Oô
second Will I even mention the net even in Tokyo Honshu Kyushu but is confusing the Oo I always had the error in the 4th Chapter.
But I think the is to cope with ... is not always noticed O_o
third I totally quite some time, to explain to Chris that he was the night through the net there ... I wrote each DERS has read what I know because for NEN shit ... but ... I verrsucht really what useful add get Oo
I explain, just so that his host mother did not want to think otherwise, since it could only bring problems if they knew where he really was, besides, it would bring only her and him at a loss (and Japanese people like to avoid such a thing)
I also had mentioned that I think his family is not always wiklich interested in him.
I think if the upper kannn not understand so and not so familiar with the school festivals in Japan, the whole seems very illogical, so I want to explain it here again ... (Maybe that was unnecessary ... but it had to get out)
Now I will tell you what I do not like the story (if you match me in one or more points, writes to me Review / as mail or here as comment, I'll try to better myself):
I feel that first
too many languages
occur second too many details
third it simply be unrealistic could be / is / will
4th the whole is to see through (I hate stories where everything is predictable!)
That's for now ...
I am working hard, a really good story to make it Oo a lot to me.
writing is not really my hobby number 1, but I still want to do my best and I hope I some point the good I like Lelis (burgundy) or Chi (Nemesis) Q__Q (long gone!)
Well no matter. Once Chapter 5 is out there, I betrayed what embarrassing ... But strangely, not even noticed! (This may not actually be Oo)
Mata ne!
A HJA! One more thing ... The next chapter is likely: I would tell you every time you leave I'm inconsolable
I like this song at the time simply *_______* also fits quite well ^ ^
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